I thought it was very awesome you are an MLP fa, and a Pokemon fan. I liked how you mixed two totally different things together, to create something extremely awesome and original. I must congradulate you on your sense of originality, and your writing skills. It's made me want to read the next one!!!! I must give you high credit for that!!! Well done, well played, and I am only sad to say I now have a rival in the world of Pokémon-lovers. Don't stop drawing, and also, Beware of harsh critiques. I hope you find mine fair.